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July 10th, 2010
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Fantasia Blog: First Squad: The Moment of Truth

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Date:July 13th, 2010 01:52 am (UTC)
Thanks! I've revised it, incorporating a lot of your suggestions (and fixing some other bits - I never proof read this one, as you guessed.)

I'll redraft my other reviews, and let you know when they're done - that way you don't need to make the same criticisms all over again :)
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